* * * I Will Return... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * I Will Return...

Rating: 3.3


Irreal there is a
My thoughts,

But, melancholy
Is the real...

Until then proce-
Eds in heart

Snowfall of
Blank verse...

But sings the roses,
All the with hearts...

By Morning sing a
Spring major's...

Only the piece
Of, winters, shines

At the mountains
Top, like so nice

As in dreams sings,
He with a base:

I will return...
Soon - very fast....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 29 March 2009

Your usage of words are as complicated as those of a master chess player...iip

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

Snow fall of blank verse...what a wonderful phrase. Your mind is filled with music.10, of course. Love, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 March 2009

You painted a beautiful picture of nature with using a paint brush of words..........Good Write.....10+++

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Allan Macli Borges 21 March 2009

what a brilliant work! the arrangement of verses gives a new tune to the poem that turn it deeper than it already is.... i just love it.

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Catrina Heart 21 March 2009

rhymes and rhythm with soft tone were so amazing as always Tsira... Snowfall of Blank verse... But sings the roses, All the with hearts... lovely, just lovely...............10

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