I walk with you by water flowing softly, quietly.
Rippling onward as entwined with it's own
Music as our hands, folded around each other.
Never releasing though winds tear waves to
Mountains, crashing to earth, back to water,
And peace, softly, quietly, flowing.
As our path through life brings us closer to
Each other, closer to the shore of
Never-ending sunrise, always laughter,
Always the love only kindred spirits know
And abide by.
Take my hand and heart, listen to my soul's
Joy of being with you forever.
Now, let us walk, hand in hand, by the waters.
I give you eternal love.
I give you eternal peace,
With you by my side.
Beauty, calmly declaring its love, peace by the flowing waters...joy and happiness full and fulfilling...I love this Wedding Song....
You know no limits or just half way. With you it will never be just a walk. I like the contrast of the elements.
This one has the soothing tone of Handel's 'Where'er you Walk'. A highly romantic piece of 'happily ever after' that never descends into sentimentality. This one makes the reader feel good. love, Allie xxxx
Very lyrical and comforting. My favorite line is 'Always the love only kindred spirits know And abide by.'
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A phenomenally clear, deep and sincere pledge of commitment appropriate to the institution. It's highly poetic in its use of imagery and yet very accessible, and should appeal to all who have romance in their hearts, who believe that love and marriage should be for a lifetime. Intensely emotional, persuasive - and attractive to a wide audience I would guess. Very fine work mz Elyzabeth. Your range is very broad indeed! jim xx