I Wish... Poem by Kavya .

I Wish...

Rating: 5.0


I wish I could be with you
Lying under the heavenly sky blue,
Counting the stars bright
Holding your hands in twilight,
Enjoying the radiant moon in the open beach
Openly our love we shall preach,
I wanna feel the cool breeze in the open air
With you by my side anything else I dont care,
I wanna pen down few romantic lines for you
Under the heavenly sky blue,
I wish you could have seen my heart of gold
Together then we could have made things unfold!
I wish.....I wish....

Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story of a heartbroken lady who is longing to be with her lover, who fails to understand her love for him.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 10 June 2015

I wish that all those lovely wishes what you penned here with your sincerity.... may your dreams come true and you be content.

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Kavya . 18 June 2015

Thx Sir for your comments - this is just an imagination of a lover I have penned down

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Valsa George 29 April 2015

Quite romantic! It is unfortunate if one is not able to fathom the depth of love, another has for him! Unless love is reciprocated, there is always pain and heart burn!

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Kavya . 30 April 2015

Thanks for your comments Mam

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Rohit Pawar 20 April 2015

Best one Kavya. The touch of your finger, And an E2E. The sand would seep, Saying our past Goodbye. Hope all your wishes come true, I pray you get well soon. You see that space ship, Don't you worry vl buy ride to Moon! !

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Kavya . 21 April 2015

Thank you Rohit for your kind wishes

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