A Special Relationship Poem by Kavya .

A Special Relationship

Rating: 4.2

You are my creator
My mentor, my teacher,
You are the guiding force of my life
Who always help me in times of strife.

I know you are and will always be
by my side,
You are someone above God
And these words I shall always abide.

I saw the world with your eyes
With your help was able to differentiate the good and the bad;
Whenever I went wrong, you corrected me and yelled at me
The privilege which every mom has on her lad.

Yes friends, she is none other than my Mom
A wonderful creation of Almighty,
As God cannot be everywhere
She is the replacement of this holy deity.

Mom, you are the epitome of my existence
The reason for my subsistence,
Howsoever I describe you, I know my words will always fall short
As a mom-child relationship is of that special sort!

Thank you Mom for everything. Love you lots.

Nobody can do anything more than a mother, whoevr he or she be! A very heart-touching poem..Good!

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Soumita Sarkar 26 April 2015

Lovely just lovely.........lines for one Mother.....Keep it up! ! ! !

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Amitava Sur 20 March 2015

A lovely penning where you kept the lovely mom above all. Very truly I also agree her to be above any God. She is the most nearest to me Who nurtured and fed me through that cord. She knotted me so endearingly with that umbilical cord ! ! !

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Rajesh Thankappan 31 January 2015

Yes, as you rightly say, mother is the God's representative on earth. A beautiful poem. Enjoyed.

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Roseann Shawiak 15 December 2014

How totally beautiful! This poem is a wonderful tribute to your Mom and mothers everywhere! Everything you have written can be said of everyone's mom, she is the one who will always share our hearts no matter what! I absolutely love this poem. My mom is gone, but you have described her as well. Thank you. RoseAnn

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Maria Mitea 25 May 2022

What a beautiful poem U, straight from the heart! Blessings!

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Beautiful beautiful. Made a revisit today and enjoyed it more

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2021

A wonderful poem on special relationship. Loved your lucid expression....5 stars

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Kavya 04 April 2018

U are my heart

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Siddartha Montik 02 February 2017

what nice more words can be like this to a mentor and especially. a mother.! ! thank you for sharingpoet.! ! - Siddartha! !

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