Dr PJ Raj Kamal

Gold Star - 5,053 Points (21-01-1956 / Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India)

I Wish I Were.... - Poem by Dr PJ Raj Kamal

I wish I were young to go back
To the country side, slack off under the shady jack
Row along with the leaves in a cool breeze
Then to plunge in a pool of deep silence
All but a nonsense in a city park


Comments about I Wish I Were.... by Dr PJ Raj Kamal

  • (10/6/2012 11:26:00 PM)


    there is poetry in those nostalgic lines... (Report) Reply

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  • <font color=00FFCC>teal Sky</font> (4/5/2012 10:17:00 PM)


    rural areas are beautiful, the fields, the rivers, the grasslands, the winds.but we are always stuck in concrete forests breathing dust and smoke. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2012 8:26:00 AM)


    a meaningful poem..I like it and has taken me to my village.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 5, 2012


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