Shandukani Felix Rashamuse

I Without Her(Rhyme) - Poem by Shandukani Felix Rashamuse

One day I started to cry
And I looked up in the sky
Because I still want to try
But my mind was already dry.
I hate the feeling without Her

What can I do without thee?
Who else will make me a cup of tea?
I dreamt of a family of three
I still can't believe I lost that key.

I will be so good and rude
so cool and harsh.
So unfaithful and trustworthy
When loneliness starts to eat me up.
Only without Her.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about I Without Her(Rhyme) by Shandukani Felix Rashamuse

  • (2/9/2018 2:22:00 PM)

    Wow very much interesting my boy. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/5/2017 7:25:00 AM)

    Wow... Interesting indeed..... A wonderful sonnet.... I like line 13 a personification... Wow i am proud boy.... (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (9/10/2015 7:07:00 PM)

    Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It's whimsical and temperamental, appearing when it pleases, and may leave without warning, if not carefully nurtured by both couples. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Felix. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST. (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/31/2015 5:32:00 AM)

    '' What can I do without thee?
    Who else will make me a cup of tea? ''

    well.. not the best for a rhyme, saying the truth.. ;)

    ' What? do I love her, that I desire to hear her speak again, and feast upon her eyes ' - Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, Act II, Scene II

    greetings from Italy, Shandukani
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  • Kelly Kurt (8/30/2015 7:25:00 PM)

    A sad poem of love lost, Shandukani (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015

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