Icy Pearls Poem by C T Heart

Icy Pearls

Rating: 4.8


Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart

Thought a gift in me will do the sway
With carriage and optimism to mold a clay
Of an ideal we, in this saccharine world
And you to dwell here in my heavenly adobe

An endeavor so rocky, stiff and bold
Never will be warm to an eyes cold
Glimpse of a callus appreciate the shot in me
Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He

Death’s arrow in an apple fruit present
Reasons constructed to fall permanent
I couldn’t embrace a rosy torn
Continuous bleeding is what I born

Strange sadness elope not in me
Tears fall in the pinky pearl petals
Quivers the entire being of he
Rest not in the arctic mountains
Lay sound in the arms of a balmy young

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kaizer Dublin 09 November 2008

nice composition... good work on emotions... Overall: Nice lyric poem, though some unclear persona within your work....

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Shruti Suresh 10 November 2008

its like each verse is a different pearl, strung together to make a beautiful necklace. pl read my new one 'finally, a goodbye'

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Min Sia 10 November 2008

No doubt..it's included in the top 500 poems..It's beautiful! ! Great work! ! !

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David Paigneau 10 November 2008

Like several little stories following each other, several feelings expressed, in a very unique and touching way, I'd say very peaceful poem, beautiful one

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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2008

a poem very different from many of your writes...is very deep...honestly thought out and written 10

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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very beautiful and wonderful write

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Cleon Barrett 24 February 2009

This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5

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Li Away 22 November 2008

that was lovely to read

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read

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Ashley Burnam 13 November 2008

I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.

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