Icy Pearls Poem by C T Heart

Icy Pearls

Rating: 4.8


Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart

Thought a gift in me will do the sway
With carriage and optimism to mold a clay
Of an ideal we, in this saccharine world
And you to dwell here in my heavenly adobe

An endeavor so rocky, stiff and bold
Never will be warm to an eyes cold
Glimpse of a callus appreciate the shot in me
Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He

Death’s arrow in an apple fruit present
Reasons constructed to fall permanent
I couldn’t embrace a rosy torn
Continuous bleeding is what I born

Strange sadness elope not in me
Tears fall in the pinky pearl petals
Quivers the entire being of he
Rest not in the arctic mountains
Lay sound in the arms of a balmy young

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edgar Andrade Baguio 12 November 2008

I felt colder with those hot lines. '...Continuous bleeding..'.I wonder if the pearls crack when it is below zero. Nice blending of thoughts to bring to higher state of life. Very imploring

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Elena Winters 12 November 2008

enjoyed your writing portrayed beautifully great job

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Sydney Love 11 November 2008

great poem! very reflective and beautifully written. well done

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2008

too sweet in thy soul, so critical to analyst, so poetic in our language, so reflective to feel, a poem that move our dream of reality, at this moment of time..... a very a beautiful indeed that lives always in my memories.... Thank you... God bless a 10 point for you

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Jerry Abrahamson 10 November 2008

A very nice poem. Keep writing.

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Rafique Farooqi 28 May 2010

very beautiful and wonderful write

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Cleon Barrett 24 February 2009

This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5

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Li Away 22 November 2008

that was lovely to read

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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read

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Ashley Burnam 13 November 2008

I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.

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