Faithfulness is a wish to have
Praying in the altar of divine love
I search forth, from dawn to dusk
To bestow the ideals in your heart
Thought a gift in me will do the sway
With carriage and optimism to mold a clay
Of an ideal we, in this saccharine world
And you to dwell here in my heavenly adobe
An endeavor so rocky, stiff and bold
Never will be warm to an eyes cold
Glimpse of a callus appreciate the shot in me
Barren beauty, bewildered in the thoughts of He
Death’s arrow in an apple fruit present
Reasons constructed to fall permanent
I couldn’t embrace a rosy torn
Continuous bleeding is what I born
Strange sadness elope not in me
Tears fall in the pinky pearl petals
Quivers the entire being of he
Rest not in the arctic mountains
Lay sound in the arms of a balmy young
great poem! very reflective and beautifully written. well done
too sweet in thy soul, so critical to analyst, so poetic in our language, so reflective to feel, a poem that move our dream of reality, at this moment of time..... a very a beautiful indeed that lives always in my memories.... Thank you... God bless a 10 point for you
This poem is good all because theres a deeper meaning than whats already being said...It shows great symbolism to...i give it 4 stars out of 5
The title is very alluring, pulling the reader into your wonderful work of art. A poetic artist you are and among the best. This one was one of my favorites. A great read
I will agree with anyone that says its a very well written but i think you should reach out to the world you least understand and see hwo that effects your writing. Lovely beyong comparison though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I felt colder with those hot lines. '...Continuous bleeding..'.I wonder if the pearls crack when it is below zero. Nice blending of thoughts to bring to higher state of life. Very imploring