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Ideal Love - Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

if a guy feels that, tis ideal love! ! !

no envy, no pain, nor torrents in rain
all i shall give is love
i wont put ur trust in vain
i swear of the heavens above

i lyk u for the gal u are
m not flirting for ur face
i know, even the greatest beauties of the world
are sometimes such a disgrace

as different ur thoughts, as simple ur lyf
feel lucky that u r here
in times of doubt, fights or strife
want u to know that i'll b near

be wid me, till eternity
together v'll cross the hurdles thru
i wud hav easily given up on lyf
if i'd never known u

today my love, as she walks down the isle
i feel lyk the luckiest person alive
mayb i wont remember wat she wore
but i wont ever forget the way she looked! ! !

Comments about Ideal Love by POOJA LADYLUCK

  • (10/26/2008 10:41:00 AM)

    Hey, a great poem. The last stanza is amazing. The simplicity in ur poems, makes them universal. Sheer joy to read them. Thank you very much. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/29/2008 12:22:00 PM)

    just be there is more than asked for.... sometimes.... all the time/// (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/29/2008 11:35:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
    Best of luck. Keep going
    Sathya narayana
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 29, 2008

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