Identifying Lonelyness Poem by Lu Vernezze

Identifying Lonelyness

Rating: 2.5


Please don't do this
Don't leave me to mourn
Come back to me
Leave the knife alone

What's so bad
That we cannot work it out

Turn around into my arms
Why are you feeling low
Hold me like you need somwhere to go

Why don't i know
Just how you feel
Feelings are feelings
Real is real

If you go you will not go alone
Cos i'll be coming with you
And we'll fly to our next home

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leo Lopes 09 October 2006

I loved your poem Lucy... very deep and meaningful I can tell you care for this person and it shows Beautiful work LL

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Vallerie Lobell 25 September 2006

sometimes feelings just can't be understood, but we stand by what we care about...enjoyed your poem....Vallerie

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