If All Men Were Black Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

If All Men Were Black

Rating: 4.3


I would own fifty pets
Go to the tumb and tell Mandela
His imprisonment has no meaning

Friday, May 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom of speech,liberation,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nkululeko Mdudu 25 February 2019

makes one think, thanks for this

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 February 2019

Kunjalo Freedom, Kunjalo nje....Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this write.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 November 2018

Nelson Mandela was a great leader, a meaningful poem

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 February 2019

True he was, ...Thanks Akhtar with your effort reading my work....much appreciated. I'm truly sorry for the late reply....I didn't see your comments until today.

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Brian 01 July 2018

A really thought provoking message... I like it

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 July 2018

Thanks Brian for being a reader of my poetry. I really appreciate every bit of your nice comments.

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Lincoln 25 June 2018

What a wordy statement! 10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 June 2018

Thanks Lincoln for your approval of this message.

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Ink of Sin 24 June 2018

Dear Poet you know better yet- (just for me) Haiku contains syllable gradually = 5 + 7 + 5 but your Haiku has composed= 6 + 9 + 9

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

I appreciate your feedback on this poem...stay blessed

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