If Got, O Give And Go Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Got, O Give And Go

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Now that you've got, O give and go,
Bare ribs and bones you see whenso,
Spare bread crumbs, no more, ere you go,
Alms, nor aid— give as if you owe.

Before wiping beads of your sweat,
Remember to dab alien tears,
Take one lamp off your sunny gate,
Watch it fight neighbour's darkest fears.

Your chosen way whilst go, whatso,
See if salubrious songs ye sing,
Cool shadow to the scorched can bring,
If you have got, O give and go.

When at sunset ye sing of dawn,
Sing it in tune or none whatso,
Make it heard long after you've gone,
Give something with you ere ye go.

Caught is the sea when in a storm,
Death staring ship-wracked in the face,
Be Pole Star, rescue pilot home,
Lead them to safety, steady pace.

Be no pedestal, nor palace,
Nor yet a diamond stand-alone,
Plough an un-furrowed farm in grace,
Be manure— made with your own bone.

Now that you've got, O give and go,
Quiet, quack-less, a kindly feat,
Resting not even to wipe brow,
Nor sweat beads of reward, sour-sweet.
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Musings | 02.08.15 |

Monday, April 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 30 April 2019

Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Now that you've got, O give and go, Quiet, quack-less, a kindly feat, Resting not even to wipe brow, Nor sweat beads of reward, sour-sweet.......so impressive. A beautiful poem on christmas having nice execution. Thanks for sharing. Thanks Kumarmani Mahakul, your appreciation means a lot.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 April 2019

Member: Savita Tyagi Comment: Marvelous poem with a wonderful sincere message. If you are blessed to have just give and go without looking back, without any expectation. Enjoyed the smooth rhyme and rhythm. A big 10. Sorry for this copy and paste job. It seems the web is slow. Thank you indeed for appreciating the poem.

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Savita Tyagi 29 April 2019

Marvelous poem with a wonderful sincere message. If you are blessed to have just give and go without looking back, without any expectation. Enjoyed the smooth rhyme and rhythm. A big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2019

Now that you've got, O give and go, Quiet, quack-less, a kindly feat, Resting not even to wipe brow, Nor sweat beads of reward, sour-sweet.......so impressive. A beautiful poem on christmas having nice execution. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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