If Life Were Not Brief Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

If Life Were Not Brief

Rating: 5.0


The green leaf
When felt, life was brief,
Said brown leaf:
It'd be brown, not if
All adrift!
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Musings | 07.03.2020 |
Topic: leaf, green, brown, life

Saturday, March 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: green,leaf,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A green leaf once felt: life was far too brief. The old brown leaf that was falling, felt: if not green and brief, life would be brown and diseased, and the cause of the green would suffer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 08 March 2020

Excellent write. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2020

Thanks for visiting dear AR, and liking the effort.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 March 2020

A fascinating senryu..........10++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2020

Thank you so much Rev Bernard for finding this poem 'fascinating'.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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