If Paradise Is Half As Nice - New Year Poem For Lyn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

If Paradise Is Half As Nice - New Year Poem For Lyn)

Rating: 5.0


Yawns
into my morning

wearing only my
Edvard Munch’s THE SCREAM
Tee-shirt

(so that’s where it’s gone)

which is a mere
miniskirt on her

scratching a well tanned
behind.

All smeared mascara
all Cleopatra eyes
all mad crazy hair
mad as a bag of spiders

dancing
(sleepily to)

Amen Corner
on the summer radio.

Takes my toast
from my poised hand

takes a bite
crunchily...noisily

then puts it back
in exactly the same position.

Pats me
on my head

“Mmmmmm.... thanks Dad! ”

“Stolen toast is always
twice as nice! ”

Sings softly
swaying to herself

“If Paradise is half
as nice

“As the Heaven that you take me
to...”

(Ooops...slops
spills her orange juice)

“...who needs Paradise? ”

“I’d rather...have you! ”

Then suddenly excitedly
talking to boyfriend No.22

on her little pink
glitzy mobile.

Guess my little girl
has(gulp) grown up!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 29 December 2008

Ah, yes...the dawning realisation that adulthood isn't far off...and yet, the clinging to and longing to keep that precious little girl for just a moment longer. But (gulp!) the knowledge that you cannot hold her back...and should, therefore, treasure each and every moment of stolen childhood just one day, one moment, more... This is tender, funny, and beautiful, all at the same time...and I thank you for it! Scarlett Linny

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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