Saturday, September 2, 2006

If We Ever Meet Comments

Rating: 5.0

Recline on your balcony
Situated in the stars,
Pour yourself a glass of wine
And gaze out into the galaxy
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Uriah Hamilton
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Amberlee Carter 07 September 2006

yes, if only the men in my life could see the world and love this way....lovely writing as always my dear friend... Always, Amberlee

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Catastrophe King 04 September 2006

This is a true work of art..... the imagery is on to its maximum limits. I wish to recline on my balcony and read through your poem-bank, with a glass of wine in my hand..... while you enjoy the beautiful walk down the poetic lane to success!

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Ernestine Northover 03 September 2006

This is a real sensual smoothy Uriah. Well written dear man, very nice indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Pia Andersson 03 September 2006

I agree you poem shines....there is no hesitation in your poem and why should there be..The last two lines are precious 'Your body is calling out to me to touch you, And indeed, I will find your tenderness.' -Pia

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Sandra Fowler 02 September 2006

Superb imagery. This one shines in its own light, Uriah. Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 September 2006

uriah, this is a'HEAP' of fine imagework here, my friend....Atmospherical Rhapsody '''''''''''''FJR

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Goldy Locks 02 September 2006

rain-lovely street. yah. tis raining in Phila. to reign in the autumn. liked this you, U.

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