Recline on your balcony
Situated in the stars,
Pour yourself a glass of wine
And gaze out into the galaxy
Where I’m walking alone
Along some rain-lovely street,
Smiling and happy.
We’ll be a bizarre but extraordinary couple
If we ever meet.
Your body is calling out to me to touch you,
And indeed, I will find your tenderness.
uriah, this is a'HEAP' of fine imagework here, my friend....Atmospherical Rhapsody '''''''''''''FJR
yes, if only the men in my life could see the world and love this way....lovely writing as always my dear friend... Always, Amberlee
This is a true work of art..... the imagery is on to its maximum limits. I wish to recline on my balcony and read through your poem-bank, with a glass of wine in my hand..... while you enjoy the beautiful walk down the poetic lane to success!
This is a real sensual smoothy Uriah. Well written dear man, very nice indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
I agree you poem shines....there is no hesitation in your poem and why should there be..The last two lines are precious 'Your body is calling out to me to touch you, And indeed, I will find your tenderness.' -Pia
Superb imagery. This one shines in its own light, Uriah. Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
rain-lovely street. yah. tis raining in Phila. to reign in the autumn. liked this you, U.