Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 405,488 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

If You Have Stress - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Laughing face, sweet smile
Scented flowers, dazzling leaves
Twinkling stars, colorful rainbow
Can't offer you pleasures
If you have stress with you.

Modern edifice, comfortable bed
Plenty wealth, royal clothes
Delicious food, sweet music
Can't give you pleasant mood
If you have stress with you.

Stress can be erased
With the help of meditation,
Have connection with God
And gain peace to enjoy life.

Topic(s) of this poem: god, life, peace, stress

Form: Free Verse


Comments about If You Have Stress by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (10/28/2018 8:17:00 PM)

    Stress is an eraser of pleasure. So beautifully conveyed in ths write. Stress is toxic to life! Learning to cope and get rid of it will allow us to receive all the other pleasurables things in life. (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (10/28/2018 4:24:00 PM)

    Taking life day bay day and natures air is also a healing process.

    Lovely words shared.
    Thank You
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  • Kalpana Barik (10/28/2018 11:44:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem on stress so nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/18/2018 1:56:00 PM)

    Superb! ! ! Every word is like a pearl.......10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (10/17/2018 4:55:00 AM)

    Leave stress
    Be easy
    feel fresh

    /// always goodly penned
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  • Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre (10/16/2018 9:30:00 PM)

    Ever such deep beauty and truth in every poem
    a message you send, of God's spirit, nature and
    beauty, with a love that's ever so inspiring! .. Thank
    you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very
    many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (10/16/2018 3:57:00 PM)

    Exactly! ! ! ! I like how you handled this topic both spiritually and poetically. 10+++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/16/2018 7:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful wisdom shared in this very well written poem.
    Excellent!
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  • Paul BrookesPaul Brookes (10/16/2018 4:05:00 AM)

    Nicely penned great philosophy. Enjoyed the poem. People strive to much for wealth which in the end leaves the person worried about keeping it all or being robbed or losing it. We need little to live if we store up wealth then we forget our spirituality and we become small people. i have noticed those that have the least seem to be the happiest. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (10/15/2018 11:41:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem that gives wisdom
    for a meaningful and beautiful life.
    Stress could negate beauty in life yet it can be erased if
    we have strong connection with God.
    A well crafted and conveyed poem.10+++++
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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (10/15/2018 11:24:00 PM)

    So true! Stress can erase all the wonderful things in life. Meditation and prayer definitely helps when practiced! Wise write! (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (10/14/2018 2:02:00 PM)

    Poetic word of wisdom! Thanks! (Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (10/14/2018 10:39:00 AM)

    Stress can be erased
    With the help of meditation
    Establishing direct connection
    With the master in the heaven
    It will certainly bestow peace of mind and allow tranquility to rule over ones life. Wonderful nuggets of wisdom incorporated in this beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10++
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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (10/14/2018 7:48:00 AM)

    Brilliant expression! A pragmatic write! Thanks dear sir for sharing....10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 14, 2018

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 24, 2019


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