If You Were Metal Poem by Wanda Swim Strunk

If You Were Metal

Rating: 5.0


If you were metal
You would be copper.
Shiny and malleable
And made into useful things
Like pots and pans
And fish shaped molds
That hang on kitchen walls

If I was metal
I would be gold
Dirty gold long forgotten at the bottom of a jewelry box
A necklace you took for a noose
I am unrealized gold
I lay waiting
for someone to polished me up then
they would have something

And she?
She is silver
Silver that could have been a sterling fork used at fancy dinner parties
Instead
She is cheap
Maybe a ring or bracelet sold at a flea market
She looks like something that should be good
But she is just an imitation of her wishes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Gg 26 June 2006

good done i loved it

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David Gerardino 13 September 2005

LIKE THE SECOND PART, VERY GOOD...

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 13 September 2005

the line 'A necklace you took for a noose' has a good ring to it. you have some good ideas here. Jake

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