If your heart pains
how could mine laugh?
If your soul trembles in fear
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To me, this poem is superb, i like the simplicity in it, its softness and that 'promise' just glorified your poem.thank you sister for such a beautiful poem.
heart sates on rune love engrossed as light of love reflexes in its mirror at each rung it dapples in colors vale still trembles joy being disowned, , emotive write by the metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
I found it quite ordinary, however, there is something about this poem. And soon I got my heart warmed up! I feel healed. thanks! good poem, i like it! !
vow! its so beautifully written! it just shows the kindness of her for others! thanks for sharing such a great poem