I'll love you when your hair turns from fair to white
And I'll love you when your frame is old and slight
I'll love you when your brow is wrinkled and creased
And I'll love you when your breath has quiet ceased
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Beautiful, beautiful poem. The recurring words in every line of the poem brilliantly depicts the eternality and great depth of love. So wonderfully crafted and executed write.
Not only does it sound like the love of a true lover, but it sounds like the love of the truest lover—our Savior! ! ! I certainly agree with Mr. Lamberton, I love the line "I'll love you when there is no when"
What a wonderful and magnificently beautiful poem! ! ! Thank you so much for blessing all of us with this masterpiece! ! ! You express such keen heartfelt love through this poem—it is fabulous! ! !
Very evocative. The closure line says it all. A favorite!