i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go,
you were my life, you were my dreams, you were so much to me,
i wanna hold you tight and never let go,
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why did you leave me why didnt you care, i cared about you, you were everything to me, now i watch you, sitting with another guy, oh why...
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i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go,
you were my life, you were my dreams, you were so much to me,
i wanna hold you tight and never let go,
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i see you crying on a matress i see him laughing in a tent, he just throws it all away and then he treats her like shes dead, but i got to calm down, cause tonight, ill be deamin of you, ya, ill be dreaming of you, and ill meet you in my dreams
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i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go,
you were my life, you were my dreams, you were so much to me,
i wanna hold you tight and never let go,
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was i just another boyfriend, was i just another guy, was i just another no one, please tell me why, and please dont lie to me, and tell me you want me
too...
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i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go,
you were my life, you were my dreams, you were so much to me,
i wanna hold you tight and never let go,
Aden, Another great song/poem. and again i conect with it. But anyway i would like to mak one suggestion and i am not saying youhave tochange it because i still really like the song the way it is but it might make it kinda cool if t the nd in the last stanza instead of 'wer' you could say it like: 'You are my life, you are my dreams, you are my everthing'. Just in the last stanza cause it sorta adds to the idea of how much you still careabout the person who you are refering too. But still great song I liked it.
Dear Aden, This one was my favorite. You are new to writing poems just like me. Keep it up and I will look for more from you.
I have an ever open heart for you, I am everready to wipe your dew, I shall never ever say you 'adieu', Once again love each other anew.
'i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go, you were my life, you were my dreams, .........' - ADEN WILKES THAT LINE JUST REALLY MAKES ME WANT TO CRY.. I REALLY LOVE YOUR SONG... HOPEFULLY SOME DAY I WILL HEAR YOU SING IT...
great song i love it and it has a great meaning and i can tell your a very talented writer great job
i loved it, it had so much heart in it. and thats really amazing.
This is really cute... the girl you wrote this about is one lucky LUCKY girl! ! ! ! i'm jelious! ! ! ! ! lol jk ttyl
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet surrendering of great love. very enchanting.