Aden Orie

Choices

I was curious,
What it would be like?
To drink allot,
And I was psyched,
now I know,
That it’s not that great,
But now I crave,
A big mistake.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 30, 2008
Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 10, 2008

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  • Amber S (10/8/2011 2:46:00 PM)

    great poem very true but everyone makes mistakes. :) so your not alone.

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  • Royàlé Dì (10/8/2011 8:04:00 AM)

    Alot said in few words..i lyk!

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  • Chatara Conway (4/23/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    Choices are big in life and your poem shows that.

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (12/27/2008 7:16:00 PM)

    Choices are the stuff of which life is made. Simple but substantive. Keep writing.

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  • Aijaz Asif (10/13/2008 2:53:00 PM)

    beautiful, simple and deep write, i like it thanx for sharing 10

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  • Hana KHana K (5/13/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    hehe...
    here i come...
    nice poem, clear and simple

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  • Roger Bowman (5/8/2008 4:16:00 PM)

    Simple clear and cool Aden

    R

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  • Annie Girl (5/8/2008 4:00:00 PM)

    i can relate to it but any way nice poem. :)

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  • Geramie White (5/5/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    Short, but a very good stament. I wouldn't be surprised if it was used for an anti-drug commercial.

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  • Monkey Mendez (5/5/2008 7:41:00 AM)

    I've thought about going that way a few times, but I never actually did it.
    (I always wanted to black out)
    Nice work! C:

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  • svetlana savrasova (5/5/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    love it
    more please
    10 fm me

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  • Maddie Bird (5/4/2008 12:51:00 AM)

    It's an amazing poem. It speaks so much through so little. I believe in constructive crittsicm, so I thought I'd just point out a couple of spelling mistakes if that's okay with you.

    'i was curious,
    of what it whould be like, '

    should be

    'i was curious,
    of what it would be like, ' (would is without an ‘h’)

    and

    “to drink alot,
    and i was siked, '

    should be

    'to drink alot,
    and i was psyched, '

    But other than that, it was great, really great.

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  • Vidi WritesVidi Writes (5/2/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    Its said that - 'While we are free to choose our actions, we are not free to choose the consequences of our actions.”

    Your poem is about the Choice and its Consequence.
    Short and sweet.
    All the best.

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  • Howard Johnson (5/2/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    A excellent hakiu with a powerful thought

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (5/1/2008 9:06:00 PM)

    A realization on the right path-well said in brief.

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  • Connie Chambers (5/1/2008 7:07:00 PM)

    this is so good i have never read such pain
    i love it

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