Illusion Poem by Little Star

Illusion

Rating: 5.0


An image of a flashing dream
An illusion that tricks my mind
Vanish, oh dream, from me
Float away and melt
Like a snow in a noisy stream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2019

That tricks my mind! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kevin Carney 26 November 2010

Beautiful poem, I agree it does seem sad and yet... Dreams are illusions at times and I love how you described it. Great poem :)

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Melvina Germain 25 March 2008

Oh this seems so sad Edna, tugging at the heart-strings yet written so beautifully. Melvina

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JoAnn McGrath 11 June 2007

I like this.....neat way of getting rid of something you don't want

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