I'm In The Middle East Poem by Dhiren Doley

I'm In The Middle East

Rating: 4.5


Things fell apart
Time had run off
And the wall of humanity broken down
The soldiers have tied their saddles
A war just began
I was not the one the gun shot
But a pain silently settled in me
And I never knew there was a sea of tears
Hidden mine within
Then I found myself standing
In the middle of the Middle East;
The solders senseless
The rulers aimless
Humanity hopeless
Love has lost its language
The song lost its tone best

A solder picked his gun up
I told him, shoot at me,
Let them run
And darkness engulfed us.

I'm In The Middle East
Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Wadhwa 25 September 2015

I see a lot of pain in your words, may be because you witnessed something that has left an impact...a lasting one..

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Magadha Rani 07 March 2020

The solders senseless/The kings aimless/Humanity hopeless/Love has lost its language/The song lost its tone best......pulsating poetic expression! A wonderful poem..........Full score!

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Bakuli Bhakali 06 November 2015

a classy beginning touching middle and of course the end reaching one's heart! ! !

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thanks a lot bhakali.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 September 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem, Let not that time come when we totally forget that we are humans.

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thank you, friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

Painful and heart touching expression about homeless people at the time of furious war. Beautiful poem....10

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thanks a lot.

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Sanjukta Nag 25 September 2015

Very heartfelt poem.. expressing the grief of the homeless people during wars.

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