Impossibilities Poem by Kadence Luneman

Impossibilities



You cant turn back the hands of time
Pour the rain back in the clouds
Unsay words spoken
Live a moment again
Whole a heart that has been broken

Saturday, May 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,heartache,heartbreak,heartbroken,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 17 May 2015

You list five impossibilities, and they are truly - impossible to undo. But why do I have a sense that this speaker has the strength of purpose to undo at least ONE of them? ? I realize my sense of this contradicts the poem's five layers of argumentation, bur honestly doesn't the speaker really want someone to say just what I said? ?

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Kelly Kurt 16 May 2015

~~Nice~~! None of those can be undone, But new clouds form from the same water, one can say better words and enjoy what the present holds and refill a heart with new love. Thanks for sharing, Kadence. Peace

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Kelly Kurt 16 May 2015

Nice! None of those can be undone, But new clouds form from the same water, one can say better words and enjoy what the present holds and refill a heart with new love. Thanks for sharing, Kadence. Peace

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Zubiya Surti 16 May 2015

That is beautiful...thanks for sharing

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Ayman Parray 16 May 2015

amazing and thought provoking writing, thank you

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