In complete silence
Heart stops, mind stops
Eyes shut, emotions closed
Up on everyone around.
Finally taking a big
Lung full of air and
...... BANG! ! ! ! ! ! !
In complete silence forever
Heart stops pumping
Mind stops working
Eyes closed to never see again
To let go without feeling pain
And let the blood drain
Suicide anyone? (I'm Not advocating) This was great. I have some poems like this you might like, but I don't put everything up, if you want I can message you.
like all big bangs after the expansion, the only thing that matters is not making a big mess.....wait...think...it could be love...or..the other heart attack...iip
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow. So much emotion. You might like my poem A Short Story About Killing Myself. It's very, well, similar, at least in subject matter.