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In Complete Silence, Death, Or Painless

Rating: 3.2

In complete silence
Heart stops, mind stops
Eyes shut, emotions closed
Up on everyone around.

Finally taking a big
Lung full of air and
...... BANG! ! ! ! ! ! !

In complete silence forever
Heart stops pumping
Mind stops working
Eyes closed to never see again
To let go without feeling pain
And let the blood drain

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow. So much emotion. You might like my poem A Short Story About Killing Myself. It's very, well, similar, at least in subject matter.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 22 June 2010

Suicide anyone? (I'm Not advocating) This was great. I have some poems like this you might like, but I don't put everything up, if you want I can message you.

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Marieta Maglas 02 July 2009

beautiful vision about death..nice abstract poem..10+

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James Mclain 26 May 2009

like all big bangs after the expansion, the only thing that matters is not making a big mess.....wait...think...it could be love...or..the other heart attack...iip

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