Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 146,452 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

In Deep Breath I Feel - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

I urge your love deeply
I know I have right to urge
So I do not pray but say
I remember you ever within.

Standing near sea I feel
Cold wind so do not urge
Standing beneath sun I get
Sun rays I get, I do not urge.

I do not pray for urging
Because you give everything
Your precious love I get
Instantly in connection.

In deep breath I meditate
You give a connective light
You are father I am son
Automatically I get rights.

Topic(s) of this poem: god, life, rights, spiritual


Comments about In Deep Breath I Feel by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Ramesh T A (11/6/2015 11:16:00 AM)


    Nicely composed poem to read, my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/6/2015 9:32:00 AM)


    God's love and blessings over our life is wonderfully inked. A10 (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (11/6/2015 3:31:00 AM)


    The path of meditation is the path towards light .wonderfully expressed. A good drop .Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/6/2015 12:38:00 AM)


    This should be the paradigm, with or without a deity.
    Nicely written
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  • Bharati Nayak (11/5/2015 10:29:00 PM)


    In deep breath I meditate
    You give a connective light
    You are father I am son
    Automatically I get rights- -So true.So nicely expressed.
    (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (11/5/2015 9:44:00 PM)


    drop the urges
    be connected
    automatically
    love just is

    a lovely expression of your beautiful path
    (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (11/5/2015 9:01:00 PM)


    i urge your love deeply..very fine sir.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015



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