In Giving Up Ye Gain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

In Giving Up Ye Gain

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An apple's beautiful and red
And gains what it readily gives,
Ready is it red shade to shed,
It's in giving that one receives.

If a man with myriad gifts is blest,
Good if a few things to him are denied,
No good if things in a storehouse are plied,
Nature cherishes giving its rich chest.

Man's blest every moment with choice:
To grumble, greedily complain,
Or grateful feel for gifted joys,
The bounty's all free— sun or rain.

Tainted, suffused with selfish thought,
Cleaving and cloyed seldom love is
If it can breathe and fly freely not,
Love clutches not, knows to release.

The world fleeting shall always pass
As moves on a passing season,
As grey clouds come to kiss green grass,
And green turns grey under hot sun.

Pray change, give up and give O man,
Learn to let Nature's bequeathed joys,
A child grows to give up her toys,
If only attitude change you can.

It's hard to give up as one knows,
So platitudes be all he pens,
And sermons heretofore he fans,
He shares, silent who shares— like rose.

So be an apple to be red,
Ready the very red to shed,
He only gets, ready that gives,
It's in giving that one receives.
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Musings | 07.10.11 |

Thursday, January 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: change,giving
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An old poem revised with a new caption and contents,
earlier comments received:
Edward Kofi Louis(12/29/2019 7: 53: 00 AM)
Sun or rain! !
It is better to give than to receive!


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Aniruddha Pathak(12/30/2019 12: 42: 00 AM)
This poem, today when i read it, I think needs some clarity.
I have to revisit it. I have come up to 2012 going back...
Thanks for visiting.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2020

Platitudes, attitudes! Red as an apple of love; To give out and, To gain in the future! ! Muse of righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Nice piece of work.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 January 2020

Wow, another 'nice piece of work', today seems my day, thank you so much

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