In Inevitable Absences... Comments

The nayaki-nayaka bhava of the earlier literature is present here...in the last two lines the most specially...nayaki's emotions in the absence of nayaka....but I don't understand why you have used the term eternal...or am I wrong totally...your style is impressive as usual....thank you

Hey Indira! What happend to u? Possessed by Goddess Saraswathi or some other like Keats and Milton............I am smothered by your poetics........what a feeling....................just I can't say orally! ! ! ! ! ! I wish I give a silent hug to you......Thank u soooo much for these wonderful feelings.........even more wonderfully expressed.

Excellent.. Nice lines depict the nature and the character..

a lovely musing there...fear is a very delicate thing..it is so solid and abstract..satan's creation..it smiles it.s way into us

a very well crafted piece Indira....you have put together so many thoughts and observations giving your reader food for thought as well...10 of course

yes...wonderfully composed. it has that anonymous touch...like the poem isn't aware of its own beauty, and it is reciting itself, charming others with its wisdom as well as its innocence. amazing. thank you.