In Limit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Limit

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The legend says” As the food intake so is the exhale”
Thoughts shall be same and face will remain pale
The health shall deteriorate and so the mind
Other people may want him to be away and demand

The habits should not be allowed to take us over
It should never command us for any cover
“Oh, I am habitual to occasional heavy drink”
Such comments may lower the prestige of person and sink

No one may trust a person if he remains in intoxicated stage
He will not be in control of his sense and unable to mange
He will not be able to walk properly and talk loose
We should certainly think over this and choose

Such kind of people are not wanted in good functions
Some of the strict measures are applied with instructions
They will be kept under watch and observation
as it is feared that they may spoil the show with relation

Everything in limit is always appreciated
No one may mind if it is balanced and equated
Person is known by his utterances and grand show
Loose character people may be avoided all times and shown the door

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

Rohani Daud and Maricela Ramírez like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

good Courtney Hubbard26 minutes ago i like the tone...i can imagine the poetry...as each word plays a scene in my mind. good! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

Nice Jessica Schwartz26 minutes ago I really enjoyed this

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 January 2014

The legend says” As the food intake so is the exhale” Thoughts shall be same and face will remain pale

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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