In Moistured Solitude Poem by indira babbellapati

In Moistured Solitude

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i once again
took a peek into
the cave of my
moistured solitude:
again those
two glowing dots
teased me for what
seemed an eternity-
one the distance
between you and me
the other the nearness
you left behind...

30nov2009
11.29hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 30 November 2009

A great title precedes a succinctly written piece that puzzles even while it explains. Clever poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sonya Florentino 30 November 2009

distance, near and far, are relative...and one can be both near and far at the same time.....

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Anju Addanki 30 November 2009

It was just a wonderful poem and just superb

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Ranjit Ravindran 30 November 2009

Wow...superb...Blessed are those eyes.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 November 2009

phew! the two dots are co-incidental ma'am! ...yet separate. awesome piece of poetry. thank you.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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