In My Dream Poem by Terry Donovan

In My Dream

Rating: 4.5


The sinking sun a halo round your head,
Your body in a graceful silhouette,
A heartbeat in each tiptoed step you tread,
Embossed the image, never to forget.
A dream from which I never wish to wake,
A sleeping answer to a long-said prayer,
A silken thread that time alone will break,
A breathless promise in the night-time air.
An apprehension of your utmost charms,
A wishful-thinking longing, manifest,
Drawn by the magnet of my open arms,
The aim of Eros put to final test.
So far so good, so heavenly sublime.
I hope this dream goes into extra time!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 24 September 2006

thought the last lines were a little corny but perhaps that worked the piece. i loved the dancing words. and whole musical vibe. for sleep/dreams!

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Terry Donovan

Terry Donovan

Amersham, Buckinghamshire
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