Striding Fog

Rookie - 100 Points (Inmortal (I think?) / On Earth)

In My Dreams - Poem by Striding Fog

In my dreams,
There wouldn’t be starving children.
Fortunate people would be more thankful.

In my dreams,
Their wouldn’t be such thing as children prison.
Accused for things they haven’t done.

In my dreams,
Everyone would not judge by the color.
But how they communicate with others.

In my dreams,
Rape wouldn’t even exist.
None of these horrible things would exist.

In my dreams,
Children shouldn’t think studying is hard.
Appreciate what their parents are doing for them.

We all have dreams.
I doubt they would come true.
But I will dream on.
Hoping that day will come.

Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Doesn't anyone dream? Dreaming things would happen...
Dream on... :)

Comments about In My Dreams by Striding Fog

  • Kelly Kurt (3/30/2015 6:16:00 PM)


    I share your dreams. Thank you for writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Kim Barney (3/14/2015 1:46:00 PM)


    Keep on dreaming. Dreams are good, and your dreams have some worthwhile goals.
    Well written, except that the apostrophe doesn't belong in the word PARENTS.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 18, 2015


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