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In Response To Belle Wassermeister's Poem, Time Is Short...[ Inspired By Belle, ' God ', And My, Bri's, Conscience *** ] Comments

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In Response to Belle Wassermeister's Poem, Time Is Short...[ Inspired by Belle, ' God ', and my, Bri's, Conscience *** ]


[[ In this poem, 'She' refers to God. ]]
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Bri Edwards
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Kingsley Egbukole 16 September 2023

Thanks Bri for expressing your thoughts on this topic like a poet. I just want to simply say that the ills of the society your enumerated in your poem are not God's intension for his children. It is the works of satan. God does not take pleasure in the sufferings of his children.

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2023

[cont.] Maybe others do also, so THAT typo is for 'YOU'! ! ! bri edwards, aka Brian Edward Whitaker in The Real World, 'still going' like Duracell Rabbit and Timex watches.

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2023

oops! ! ! ! I see in the poem's LAST LINE.....a typo! ! ! ! Maybe I won't correct it (at least not now) . i know that I, Bri, like to FIND TYPOS. [ cont.]

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