In Solitude Poem by Carmina Abrenica

In Solitude

Rating: 5.0


Time after time I juggled
Between waking up and sleeping
I remember how we chuckled
Over cans of beer we're drinking
I greeted the morning light
And you were out of my sight
Off to the table, I ate the pizza from last night
With every thought of you, I feel alright
I remember how my lips tasted the softness of yours
And how you responded with delicate kisses
I remember how our bodies seamlessly glided without a force
And the silence of our touch that voiced out our wishes
And also how you cracked a joke that my hand is coarse
I remember how you bother gaining weight because we eat a bunch of dishes
And I will remember our moments when tears down my cheeks didnt course
As Im being fettered in your warm embrace feeling our palms' creases
And all the times we make up after every discourse
I remember missing you from afar and all the more when we're together
And how love feels like in every weather
Off to the bathroom, I filled the tub with water
I remember that moment we were here together
As I felt the heat in my body greasing
Snail-paced, I laid perfectly soaking
All I can hear is my own breathing
Until I pressed the button to make my bath bubbling
Off to the shower area, I got myself tidy
When I reached for my phone, you said you're still busy
For a little more time, I will be alone
Barenaked, I may be chilled or heated to the bone
But I know that to me, you will always come home
In the quiescence of this haven, you are my very own.

MCVA
9/25/18 11: 36 AM

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2019

I remember that moment we were here together As I felt the heat in my body greasing Snail-paced, I laid perfectly soaking All I can hear is my own breathing//// written beautifully on the solitude but in love

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Chinedu Dike 29 July 2019

A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Carmina.

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Carmina Abrenica 30 July 2019

Thank you and God bless

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Wonderful poem Carmina.I like your style of writing. Thank you for sharing. Mario odekerken

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Carmina Abrenica 28 July 2019

Thank you very much. Well appreciated feedback ??

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