Monday, May 7, 2007

In The Bright Colours Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our tongues
like little fishes
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Dónall Dempsey
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Gina Pisapia 08 January 2008

Beautiful poem and so well set up and contructed...it just says itself so simply...simply delicious love Gina Fish Fish Fish

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Scarlett Treat 04 January 2008

And, as always, each little fishie is solid gold....that can be seen flashing by, no matter the color of the water, bright and gleaming like a diamond! ! ! !

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Dee Dee Wright 02 January 2008

Donall...this is lovely. I like the fact that the darting little kisses are like fishes and then become the fishes in all their glorious markings. Such a beautiful description of the art of kissing...you are all 'art mate...all 'art. And the announcement of the final colour is just so very lovely. Love it so I do. love Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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