In The Bright Colours Of Love Poem by Dónall Dempsey

In The Bright Colours Of Love

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Our tongues
like little fishes

darting in & out
of each other's mouth.

Here...a playful
little fish.

Here...a fish
vivid with lust.

There...
a fish

arrayed
in the bright

colours of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Pisapia 08 January 2008

Beautiful poem and so well set up and contructed...it just says itself so simply...simply delicious love Gina Fish Fish Fish

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Scarlett Treat 04 January 2008

And, as always, each little fishie is solid gold....that can be seen flashing by, no matter the color of the water, bright and gleaming like a diamond! ! ! !

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Dee Dee Wright 02 January 2008

Donall...this is lovely. I like the fact that the darting little kisses are like fishes and then become the fishes in all their glorious markings. Such a beautiful description of the art of kissing...you are all 'art mate...all 'art. And the announcement of the final colour is just so very lovely. Love it so I do. love Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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