Wednesday, July 22, 2009

In The Dark Portals Comments

Rating: 5.0

may have lived
several moonlit nights
but only one dropp of
moon-light breaths
...
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indira babbellapati
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We keep getting direction after direction in life and one that changes is all that counts.

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Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

dear indira....this is so beautiful.each poem is better than the other.keep writing good poetry for us to read.....ritty

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/1/2009 2: 24: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: in the dark portals Has a very dreamy feel to it.

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This flows so beautifully indira. The repetition works so well and it was a joy to read your images throughout. The 'one' theme is so meaningful and wonderful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Crenshaw happytime 04 August 2009

good stuff, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Your devoted reader, CH

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Sandhya S N 27 July 2009

Sure. In the life we may come accorss many but one will be considered very special all through the life regards sandhya

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Rakesh Bedi 22 July 2009

A nice thought/nicely expressed!

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Pink Butterfly ... 22 July 2009

Nicely written! KEEP IT UP! ! ! !

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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