may have lived
several moonlit nights
but only one dropp of
moon-light breaths
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dear indira....this is so beautiful.each poem is better than the other.keep writing good poetry for us to read.....ritty
From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 8/1/2009 2: 24: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: in the dark portals Has a very dreamy feel to it.
This flows so beautifully indira. The repetition works so well and it was a joy to read your images throughout. The 'one' theme is so meaningful and wonderful. 10 Karin Anderson
good stuff, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Your devoted reader, CH
Sure. In the life we may come accorss many but one will be considered very special all through the life regards sandhya
We keep getting direction after direction in life and one that changes is all that counts.