In The Eyes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In The Eyes

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In the eyes
Wednesday, September 9,2020
8: 05 AM

Eyes force to flutter
and utter
an eagerness
with the smile on the face

I see the beauty
and fall for it suddenly
thousands of thought cross mind
some joy definitely wind and rewind

but what is this happening?
she is saddening me
no visible gesture
stone face and displeasure

will she decline?
Idefied and inclined
to approach with a new move
and prove to be trusted ally

"no, I am not in for such proposals"
I know the mentality of people
"not at first sight" to go right
I was slightly taken aback

why so much of an arrogance?
I thought it once and brushed aside
settled foranother move and called on
this time, she showed an inclination

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

In The Eyes
Tuesday, September 8, 2020
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 September 2020

settled for another move and called on this time, she showed an inclination Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Deluke Muwanigwa 08 September 2020

Nice poem. Thats what pretty ladies do. Play hard to get in the meantime she already knows colour of wedding gown and how many kids she wants. I guess the thrill is in the chase

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2020

Through eyes you see the beauty suddenly. Beauty is well judged. Life is visioned through wonderful eyes. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2020

Like · Reply · 1d Lomas Kumar Bhatt Lomas Kumar BhattAuthor Hasmukh Mehta ji wonderful appreciation sir, Humble Gratitude Dear Honourable Poet 🙏❤️🤗 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 6h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2020

welcome Lomas Kumar Bhatt 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2020

why so much of an arrogance? I thought it once and brushed aside settled foranother move and called on this time, she showed an inclination Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2020

Poem: 59148734 - In The Eyes Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: Through eyes you see the beauty suddenly. Beauty is well judged. Life is visioned through wonderful eyes. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 September 2020

Poem: 59148734 - In The Eyes Member: Deluke Muwanigwa Comment: Nice poem. Thats what pretty ladies do. Play hard to get in the meantime she already knows colour of wedding gown and how many kids she wants. I guess the thrill is in the chase

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