Friday, May 27, 2016

In The Forest Comments

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I wake with the first glow of dawn
in my cabin in the forest

the windows open wide in good weather
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 31 May 2016

This poem has a very calming effect. This is definitely a dream place to be in.

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Barry Middleton 31 May 2016

Thanks Nosheen. Thant is what it is all about.

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Dimitrios Galanis 27 May 2016

It reminds me, Barry, the W.Wordsworth: It Was An April Morning: Fresh And Clear which I have translated into my language too.Marvellous the scene depicted.

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Barry Middleton 27 May 2016

The spot depicted is real but the cabin is imaginary but very much like another cabin I often camped in. I think I love the forest as much as Wordsworth or anyone can. Thanks for the comment.

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Annette Aitken 27 May 2016

This has so many visuals for me it's like a mini film unfolding as I read along eash line. Nicely done Annette.

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Barry Middleton 27 May 2016

Thank you Annette, I tried to get an appeal to sight and sound and feeling.

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