Thursday, December 18, 2014

In This Dark Dynamic Forest Comments

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Who is killing me alive? I dive into the ocean of death.
Uncontrolled body, drunk soul, toddlers walk with meth,
A gusty wind makes the garden barren; fallen dry petals,
No rustle and hustle and bustle; darken grief boldly rattles,
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Susan Williams 23 December 2020

Who is killing me alive? I dive into the ocean of death. Uncontrolled body, drunk soul, toddlers walk with meth, A gusty wind makes the garden barren;

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2014

A gusty wind makes the garden barren; fallen dry petals, No rustle and hustle and bustle; darken grief boldly rattles, - -Exquisite composing. Excellent word choice. Many thanks dear sir.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 December 2014

if enemies fight with enemies, their action can be justified as the enmity..what about the fight between brothers, who have the same ideology for what they would like to reach the martyrdom? it is very sad to watch the TV on these hostage crisis..well written..Thank you for sharing...

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Aftab Alam

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