Indefinite Impression Poem by Smoky Hoss

Indefinite Impression

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Woke up this morning
looked out my window pane,
gray clouds coming
bringing on that old falling rain -
highly indicitive
are drops made of dust,
the punctuality
of all things working out the way they must -
a rabbit under the bush
lays sleeping,
as birds gather to trees
weeping -
some
glad,
some
sad -
not a one can still
what must come,
the seasons shall roll on
until time itself is done -
and I a mere mortal
alone,
can only decipher so much
of the great unknown -
while these vaporous
indefinite impressions,
go right on recklessly teaching
life's most resolute lessons -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2012

I loved this poem! You express feelings I can so relate to, and once again, bring nature and all its wonderful glories into the picture perfectly. I continue to learn lifes valuable lessons, some happily, yet some so sadly. Excellent poem, thank you.

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