In This Room Poem by Smoky Hoss

In This Room

Rating: 5.0


A severe sadness has entered the room.
Cold, dark and sinister.
Now we find we cannot see
where we are going.
We will have to go slowly now,
feeling our way, day by lonesome day.
Oh, though we are prone
to the loneliest of human emotions,
doubt,
somewhere deep in this room
we shall find
we know the way,
we always have.
Though the sadness be so sinister,
sinister in it's deception,
sinister in it's consumption,
it is not able to last.
Because, in this room,
hope was, long before sadness is;
and hope shall be,
long beyond the inevitable demise
of sadness.
Though the way may prove to be
long, arduous, nearly devastating,
we will make that journey
all the way.
All the way to where
the hope that filled our room
first showed us.
Though now the sadness blinds us
with tears of great longing,
paradoxically, it is those same heavy tears
that will inevitably wash
all of the sadness out of our room.
When enough tears, in time,
have fell,
then we will arise
in this room, our room,
the room that is our heart.
In the final analysis
doubt and sadness must lose,
for in the end, in this room, our room,
Love wins.

Tuesday, June 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 02 July 2018

hey, smoky! it's been a while since i visited your poems, but here i am today, and chose to read this one first—which i like. to the last line and the conviction throughout, amen! two things came to mind right away—my latest posting cottontail which has some of the same convictions and a favorite statement from romans in the kjv that abraham hoped against hope. on to the next poem, glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 June 2018

Smoky, such a well expressed poem....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 June 2018

Hope remains and love wins. This poem is definitely an amazing poem very brilliantly penned...10

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Robert Murray Smith 05 June 2018

Smoky, my friend you sure do go on. Now, the poem has wrung itself dry it can cry. Good write. ++10

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