Indoor Cat Poem by M.J. Lemon

Indoor Cat

Rating: 5.0

Bright orange fur
arched back slow step
crab walk
shuffle shuffle crab walk
open air barrier
complete stop sniff
deep breath
closing door prompts
step back yawn back roll
linoleum linen

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2026

I like bright orange cat. They usually catch attention. I can see at close range this lovely cat with your viivid and detailed description. Superb, superb imagery as always.

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M.J. Lemon 06 August 2026

Many thanks, Rose Marie. I am just sitting next to the cat at this very moment. Thanks again.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 July 2026

2) cont'd: As always, an interesting, very creative and great write from you, my friend!

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Richard Wlodarski 29 July 2026

Although this is a beautiful tribute to the cat, I'm also viewing it as a political satire of the rat. I love stretching mine imagination in reading and writing poetry!

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M.J. Lemon 06 August 2026

Thank you, Richard. O yes, I had quite a few metaphors in mind when I was watching this cat trying to interact with the threshold to 'freedom.' There is and was a rat in this for sure! Thanks so much, Richard.

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Rob Lamberton 29 July 2026

Nice cat poem!

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M.J. Lemon 06 August 2026

Thanks so very much, Rob.

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