Bright orange fur
arched back slow step
crab walk
shuffle shuffle crab walk
open air barrier
complete stop sniff
deep breath
closing door prompts
step back yawn back roll
linoleum linen
2) cont'd: As always, an interesting, very creative and great write from you, my friend!
Although this is a beautiful tribute to the cat, I'm also viewing it as a political satire of the rat. I love stretching mine imagination in reading and writing poetry!
Thank you, Richard. O yes, I had quite a few metaphors in mind when I was watching this cat trying to interact with the threshold to 'freedom.' There is and was a rat in this for sure! Thanks so much, Richard.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like bright orange cat. They usually catch attention. I can see at close range this lovely cat with your viivid and detailed description. Superb, superb imagery as always.
Many thanks, Rose Marie. I am just sitting next to the cat at this very moment. Thanks again.