Incunabulum Poem by M.J. Lemon

Incunabulum

Rating: 4.8


childhood memories
stretch all the way back to when
time itself began

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,perception,understanding
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 October 2017

Many of my poems are celebrations of childhood! Yes, Lemon, those memories stretch far back to the time man evolved. Though living in the past is despicable, we unknowingly slip back again and again to those glorious days. This poem, like a catalyst, has precipitated a surge of beautiful memories in me!

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Mj Lemon 06 October 2017

Valsa, Thank you so very much. It is rewarding to learn that this poem had such an effect on you.

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Susan Williams 15 September 2017

Now look what you made me do! ! ! ! Chase down the definition of a word... pant, pant, pant.... that word moved fast but I finally penned it down ;) singular incunabulum: 1.extant copies of books produced in the earliest stages (before 1501) of printing from movable type.; 2. the earliest stages or first traces of anything; 3. swaddling clothes, also, figuratively, childhood, beginnings; Armed with this knowledge, I reread your poem and voila! ! ! it opened up like a flower exposed to sunlight! ! ! childhood memories stretch all the way back to when time itself began - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -This senryu is awesome! ! ! This is what I read your poetry for, my friend- -for the opportunity to read beautiful and flawless treasures from the wisdom of a poet's mind and the tenderness of a poet's heart. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list! ! !

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Mj Lemon 17 September 2017

Wow, thank you so much Susan. Yes, I meant all of those meanings to be understood. Each gives the poem a slightly different dimension and meaning. Did not mean to cause exhaustion! ! !

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Muhammad Ali 08 September 2017

a man is a world, every world begins its own time. beautifully delivered poetic image, your poems are beautiful, and also serve as IQ exercise for me. sometimes it takes time to catch the point. but I tried every time

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2017

Muhammad, that is such a tremendous compliment. Thank you.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 07 September 2017

Yes, a nice haiku.Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2017

Thank you so much, Akham.

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2017

Wow, love the time machine you created in this work....like watching old movies, we treasured them most than recent days, old memories but thats how we growing to be who we are now, and thats how we walk together and getting with our friend, time....well time aged too just never wrinkled! hahaha

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Mj Lemon 06 September 2017

Thank you so much, Soul. You are right on with that observation about the time machine. Thanks again.

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