Inner Peace (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Inner Peace (Senryu)



with a kung fu kick
inside shaolin temple
ego surrenders

© 2017

Saturday, October 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naomi Waters 07 November 2017

Way too short. It makes me feel like this isnt much of a poem. Im not trying to be mean but you made it so short that the reader has no time to understand it. Try to make it longer and just let yourself feel something when you write it. The best poems are the ones with the strongest emotions. Write from your heart

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Savita Tyagi 03 November 2017

Marvelous! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2017

Breaking ego and surrendering this before God is wise.

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