Monday, December 1, 2014

Innoncence Comments

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For how many days can I survive
In this desert of desire
Still I know that price to thrive
Which I paid for love fire
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Sally Plumb Plumb 21 December 2014

I fully understand this piece of work. I'm thinking back. Thanks.

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Galina Italyanskaya 14 December 2014

It's very sad and moving. Actually love gives us more questions than answers.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 December 2014

So beautiful poem -For how many days can I survive In this desert of desire thank you :)

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Valsa George 01 December 2014

You have beautifully expressed the pain caused by the rejection of love, but yet you are hopeful and not disheartened! Enjoyed!

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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