Ins And Outs Poem by Hans Ostrom

Ins And Outs



A cat is walking in and
walking out as a tide is going
out and coming in as metro
trains are going out and
coming in as harmonica
buskers suck notes in
and blow notes out,

as workers enter and exit
buildings of their jobs
as your breath is going
out and coming in as
your sense of consciousness
is pulling back, now
pushing forth- in

this moment, as you
observe to yourself
you are alive.



hans ostrom 2019
at August 17,2019

Tuesday, August 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cats,consciousness,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 20 August 2019

And as I suppose you went to In n' Out for a burger later for dinner? Actually, not to make this a trite poem- I actually liked the poem very much. I just couldn't help myself. Nice sense of repetition and mantra

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