Inside My Madness Poem by sandy nobody

Inside My Madness

Rating: 5.0


driven into madness
living a life of just sadness

trying to make the best
but cant forget the rest

life is so full of pain
always losing never to gain

feeling like living dead
waking up sometimes i dread

nothing but emptyness inside
can not run and hide

my mind is slowly deteriorating
life is death, just waiting

why must i suffer so
i really do not know

my bodys full of pain and numbness
my mind is blank and full of dumbness

ending it all, is not a choice
saying anything, i have no voice

i have to keep going through the days
looking for better or different ways

cannot let the madness take over
putting my head under the cover

going to sleep at the end of the day
trying to keep the demons away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 05 May 2014

smooth style indeed keep it up

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Prasanna Kumari 28 September 2006

the smooth flow of words is very pleasing.the poem brings out the hopelessness, helplessness, frustation and disappointment very effectively.nice poem

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Jack Dylan 29 June 2006

Beautifule imagery in a simple clear cut fashion, I relate well, and it alway feels somewhat better to wite these things done and look to tomorrow, remember, , , life us just a ride abd feekings cone and feeling come and go, may your future be filled with joy abd rewarding contentment, best of luck. Overall I give it a 10, I totally relate.

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