1 Wish Poem by sandy nobody

1 Wish

Rating: 5.0


if i had 1 wish
i'd wish for you
for you to love
me too

if i had 1 dream
it would be with you
for you to dream of
me too

if i had only 1 day
i'd spend it with you
all alone,
just us two

i had 1 day
i spent with you

i had 1 dream
was all about you

i have 1 heart
which i gave to you

and

you broke it
in two

my wishes and dreams
never come true
so it seems
i'm wasting my time with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Greene 14 April 2007

Hi Sandy, This is a very sweet poem. I really love this. James

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Anthony Esposito 17 January 2007

idk how to put this in words i like it alot i enjoy reading it

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

Sandy, what an increditable write. This is a write from the heart. It is. It makes be think of the 'relationship recently I thought I had.' But when you have true love you wish for all these things you wrote about and for that which is not real is the latter part you mentioned...wasting your time and broken dreams....for I know that only too well now. Beautiful write...

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Peggysue Toole 28 December 2006

I feel your heartache in the words of this poem. Love is so beautiful when it goes smoothly, and so hurtful when one is being ignored or it seems we are getting no wheres. I wish you the best obtaining your dream. Thank you for reading one of my poems.

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Jim Foulk 15 December 2006

I LIKE YOUR POEM, ITS RIGHT TO THE POINT AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND AND VERY TOUCHING.

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