Inspirational Haiku - Forgive Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Inspirational Haiku - Forgive



forgive
and you'll
be forgiven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 17 November 2008

ECCL: 3 says different but forgiving is true

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 November 2008

So True John... Andrew 10

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Michael Pruchnicki 17 November 2008

How can this be a haiku? forgive = 2 syllables and you'll = 3 be forgiven = 4 9 syllables instead of 17? No concrete image! No nature reference! Consider these - the fat lady bends over the tomatoes a full moon by a. pizzarelli a single tulip! hopelessly i passed on a drizzling rain... washing their blood into their blood by m. mcclintock

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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